Thursday, 18 August 2016

Short Narrative Writing

Brrrring G! I answered the phone and I heard someone talking, the voice sounded strange. I could hear something weird. The next day my phone rang again, it seemed like the same strange person then they  said ‘ blah blah blah”. I said  “What? What are you talking about?”
Then I ended the call, but the stranger kept calling me. Finally when I answered the call, the stranger said “This is your brother Max”  He had played a good trick on me, it was a joke. I didn’t know he had changed his number. This time  I saved his new phone number to my phone so now I know who’s calling me.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Olga,
    I like your story, It had a great hook in the beginning. My favorite part was the ending it was a very funny twist and prank. It sounds like my Cousins.
    Keep it up!